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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Phenomenal piece as always, V! I often say that curse words are the spice of language. Used correctly (like you did here) they can add flavor to writing. Overdo them (like with real seasonings) and you ruin the dish.

This was a wonderful example of using curse words to drive home the emotional impact. An excellent poem as always.

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Remy Lourdes's avatar

Really enjoyed this :)

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